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In fact, the chain link not only changes the production method of farmers but also

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1. In fact, the chain link not only changes the production method of farmers but also contributes to improving the quality and value of products. In particular, thanks to chain linkage, many businesses have promoted their efficiency in all situations. Mr. Nguyen Van Chu, Director of Organic Green Food Co. , Ltd (Thuong Tin district) shared, Currently, Organic Green is associated with more than 100 production facilities and has 90 product distribution stores. In the context of concerns about food safety and hygiene, many consumers have switched to using foods with clear labels and origins, so the chain's sales volume has also doubled. double than before
1. In fact, the chain link not
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the production method of farmers
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contributes to improving the quality and value of products.
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, thanks to chain linkage,
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many
businesses have promoted their efficiency in all situations.

Mr. Nguyen Van
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Chu
, Director of Organic Green Food Co.
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Thuong
Tin district) shared,
Currently
, Organic Green
is associated
with more than 100 production facilities and has 90 product distribution stores. In the context of concerns about food safety and hygiene,
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many
consumers have switched to using foods with
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clear
labels and origins,
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the chain's sales volume has
also
doubled.
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double
than
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IELTS essay In fact, the chain link not only changes the production method of farmers but also

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