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In education and employment, some people work harder than others

In education and employment, some people work harder than others GrJEe

It is true that some individuals are more studious and workaholic in comparison with other members in society. Although it can be beneficial in reaching your goals, I think that it can have negative effects on your health and social life. We can shape our personalities, we control our destinies, by working hard we can achieve any goals we put in our minds. In spite of the fact that success in most cases gained through making strenuous efforts both in education and business life, you should do everything within borders of your mental and physical abilities.

It is true that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals are more studious and workaholic in comparison
 with other members in society. Although it can be beneficial in reaching your goals, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it can have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects on your health and social life.

We can shape our personalities, we control our destinies, by working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 we can achieve any goals we put in our minds.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 the fact that success in most cases
 gained through making strenuous efforts both in education and business life, you should do everything within borders of your mental and physical abilities. 