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In contrast to the argument that public transportation does not significantly affect air quality, there is much research to suggest that leaded petrol is incredibly polluting. do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose.

In contrast to the argument that public transportation does not significantly affect air quality, there is much research to suggest that leaded petrol is incredibly polluting. do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose. 9BEnX
Traveling by public transport will be an option for everyone. At the same time, the trend of developing green-smart traffic is the right direction to create sustainability. Public transport can help improve the urban fabric by freeing up space that would otherwise be used for roads and parking, and enabling other activities such as parks pedestrians and open spaces with an environmental appeal. Public transport will play an important role in ensuring traffic safety, saving fuel and reducing environmental pollution.
Traveling by public transport will be an option for everyone. At the same time, the trend of developing green-smart traffic is the right direction to create sustainability. Public transport can
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for roads and parking, and enabling other activities such as parks pedestrians and open spaces with an environmental appeal. Public transport will play an
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role in ensuring traffic safety, saving fuel and reducing environmental pollution.
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IELTS essay In contrast to the argument that public transportation does not significantly affect air quality, there is much research to suggest that leaded petrol is incredibly polluting. do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose.

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80 words
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