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2. There is significant evidence to suggest that a online learning is much better than studying in a regular classroom.

2. There is significant evidence to suggest that a online learning is much better than studying in a regular classroom. a7bWY
One of the benefits of online learning is convenience. Instead of having to study at one location, learning and teaching can be done at home. Teachers and students can study on a tablet or laptop so learning can take place almost anywhere without having to worry that the classroom is too far from home. Online learning also saves time for teachers, students and parents. No more travel, shuttle or worry about the distance to class and that time can be spent on other activities.
One of the benefits of online
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is convenience.
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of having to study at one location,
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and teaching can
be done
at home. Teachers and students can study on a tablet or laptop
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can take place almost anywhere without having to worry that the classroom is too far from home. Online
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also
saves time for teachers, students and parents. No more travel, shuttle or worry about the distance to
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and that time can
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IELTS essay 2. There is significant evidence to suggest that a online learning is much better than studying in a regular classroom.

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