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In any organisation, a team works to maximise effectiveness in the company and raise the morale, creativity, planning, efficiency, initiative as well as learning

In any organisation, a team works to maximise effectiveness in the company and raise the morale, creativity, planning, efficiency, initiative as well as learning bEeDP

"In any organisation, a team works to maximise effectiveness in the company and raise the morale, creativity, planning, efficiency, initiative as well as learning" 1. These days, while living in a more and more developing society, teamwork is one of the essential skills that a global citizen needs. Ifeanyi Enoch Onuoha has a quote about this topic: "Teamwork is the secret that makes common people achieve an uncommon result" 2. Thus, we can aware of the advantages of teamwork, but this topic is also a debatable issue when many people suppose that teamwork brings trouble. I choose this idea not only to clarify the opinions of writers but also to express my viewpoints.

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