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In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years. Do you agree?

In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years. Do you agree? 0ABoG
Some people argue that the leaders of business, government, politics or any other field should be in charge for no more than five years. From my point of view, it is definitely justifiable because this approach may benefit both the individuals and the industries. This essay firstly will present the advantages of stepping down after five years of performing in high managerial positions for individuals and after that, the benefits for the industries of this will be provided. The people, who have the power in their hand, by managing a company, business or even the government may gain several advantages of the voluntarily leaving their positions after five years. I think that, the period of five years is enough time for a strong leader to demonstrate his or her professional knowledge and skills in any field. Moreover, after this time a leader may become bored by doing the same duties and lose motivation to perform a work effectively. So, changing a career is a perfect tool to refresh professional experience that may bring new incredible opportunities for the leaders such as growth, professional development and new network. On the other hand, the industries also need the new energetic leaders for the sustainable growth. It cannot be denied that all people have different strengths and approaches to solve a problem as well as different values and visions. Therefore, when one leader replaces another leader, the industry may gain new opportunities for development. For example, a new leader may implement a new successful strategy or launch a new product or service. It is obvious that any field required new ideas and strategies for a sustainable growth; hence, changing the management is a one way to achieve this goal. In conclusion, I do believe that any leaders should leave their positions after five years because it may provide the benefits for both the individual and industry.
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argue that the
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leaders
of business,
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government
, politics or any other field should be in charge for no more than five years. From my point of view, it is definitely justifiable
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because
this approach may benefit both the individuals and the
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industries
. This essay
firstly
will present the advantages of stepping down after five years of performing in high managerial positions for individuals and after that, the benefits for the
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industries
of this will
be provided
.

The
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people
, who have the power in their hand, by managing a
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company
, business or even the
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government
may gain several advantages of the
voluntarily
leaving their positions after five years. I
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think
that, the period of five years is
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enough
time for a strong
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leader
to demonstrate
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his or her
professional knowledge and
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skills
in any field.
Moreover
, after this time a
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leader
may become bored by doing the same duties and lose motivation to perform a work
effectively
.
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So
, changing a career is a perfect tool to refresh professional experience that may bring
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new
incredible opportunities for the
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leaders
such as growth, professional development and
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new
network.

On the other hand
, the
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industries
also
need the
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new
energetic
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leaders
for the sustainable growth. It cannot
be denied
that all
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people
have
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different
strengths and approaches to solve a problem
as well
as
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different
values and visions.
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, when one
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leader
replaces another
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leader
, the
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industry
may gain
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new
opportunities for development.
For example
, a
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new
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leader
may implement a
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new
successful strategy or launch a
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new
product or service. It is obvious that any field required
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new
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ideas
and strategies for a sustainable growth;
hence
, changing the management is a one way to achieve this goal.

In conclusion
, I do believe that any
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leaders
should
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leave
their positions after five years
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because
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industry
.
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IELTS essay In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years. Do you agree?

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