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In 20 days cctv cameras are installed at public places very commonly. Some people say that it help to reduce the crime while other say it restrict human freedom. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In 20 days cctv cameras are installed at public places very commonly. Some people say that it help to reduce the crime while other say it restrict human freedom. e3N0O
Undoubtable, crime rate prolifirate in days, government installed surveillant cameras in public places so numbers individual ponder that this task is subtle to reduce the crime in society even other argue that it control the human Liberty. I will discuss both view, will elaborate key reason with provide safety or security and all time monitoring feel uncomfortable in subsequent paragraph with my opinion. To espouse the first notion the significant cause is CCTV cameras provide safety and security nowadays many building installed security cameras then people who lived in this apartment feel security of their children, car and another things from criminal or thefts. Moreover civilian cameras also accurate for information or evidence most of the time police use recording of these cameras as evidence and get information about criminal. For example crime rate in Dubai is one of the most lowest level as compared to other Nation due to great security cameras along with the cities. On the contradict, surveillant cameras reduct human freedom because all the time monitoring people feel uncomfortable whereas, individuals do not concentration on their work properly. it also destroyed the right of whatever do, people can not do anything what they actually want due to monitoring. Furthermore sometimes misuse of cctv cameras recording, because the advancement in advancement in technology criminal do editing in video clips even present in a different ways. To instance an article published in Hindustan Times reported that criminal misuse recording with editing because not all cctv cameras connect with police security. From all above mention one can conclude that surveillant cameras reduce the crime rate but it should used in rule and regulation that it not affect the people life.
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rate
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government
installed
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in public places
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reduce
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crime
in society even other argue that it control the human Liberty. I will discuss both view, will elaborate key reason with provide safety or
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security
and all
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time
monitoring feel uncomfortable in subsequent paragraph with my opinion. To espouse the
first
notion the significant cause is CCTV
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cameras
provide safety and
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security
nowadays
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many building
installed
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security
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cameras
then
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people
who
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lived
in this apartment feel
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security
of their children, car and another things from
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criminal
or thefts.
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Moreover
civilian
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cameras
also
accurate for information or evidence most of the
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time
police
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use
recording of these
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cameras
as evidence and
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get
information about
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criminal
.
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crime
rate in Dubai is one of the
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most lowest
level as compared to other Nation due to great
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security
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cameras
along with the cities. On
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surveillant
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cameras
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human freedom
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all the
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time
monitoring
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people
feel uncomfortable whereas, individuals do not concentration on their work
properly
.
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it
also
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the right of whatever do,
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people
can not do anything what they actually want due to
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monitoring
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misuse of
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cctv
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recording,
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technology
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do editing
in video clips even present in a
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. To instance an article published in Hindustan
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reported that
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criminal
misuse recording with editing
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not all
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cctv
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cameras
connect with police
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security
. From all above mention one can conclude that
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surveillant
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cameras
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reduce
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rate
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used
in
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rule
and regulation that it not affect the
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people
life.
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IELTS essay In 20 days cctv cameras are installed at public places very commonly. Some people say that it help to reduce the crime while other say it restrict human freedom.

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