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Importance should be given to academic subjects by school . Music and sports should not be as subject . Do you agree or Disagree ? Give reasons and Examples of your answer.

Importance should be given to academic subjects by school. Music and sports should not be as subject. Give reasons and Examples of your answer. 8N6B

Education plays significant role in children's life. Education is most important part to raise a child, by giving them education they become a great person. Nowadays, education is become must activity for children. Parents put their children's in school to get education. In school all subjects are equally important for children. Only give an importance on core subjects not on music and sports. I completely disagree with that statement. Reasons for disagreement are given in ensuing paragraphs.

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 give an importance on core subjects not on music and sports. I completely disagree with that statement. Reasons for disagreement are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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