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The World Cup, Olympics and other international games are celebrated with big support and expectations from all countries. These sporting events impact international relations. The regular organization of competitions has created opportunities for each person to understand more about the people and culture of each country. Since then, political tensions have been eased. On the other hand, blaming, playing bad or showing extreme patriotism in some sports matches can cause pressure on players and anger on fans. This makes international relations more strained. In general, patriotism or international relations do not depend on competitions. But more or less, competitions are a good way to defuse tensions between countries.
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IELTS essay impact of popular sporting events.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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