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Immigration has a major impact on society. Opinion essay.

Immigration has a major impact on society. Opinion essay. 3g6nJ

Nowadays, immigration has a lot of impact on society. But first of all, what is immigration? It happens when people leave and arrive in different countries in order to find a better job or life. The main reasons for this process are poverty and lack of work opportunities in their homeland. Furthermore, it affects the structure of society in the arrival countries. Even though there are some advantages to this, the impact is more negative than positive.

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a lot of
 impact on society. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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first of all
, what is immigration? It happens when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 and arrive in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries in order to find a better job or life. The main reasons for this process are poverty and lack of work opportunities in their homeland. Furthermore
, it affects the structure of society in the arrival countries. Even though
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advantages to this, the impact is more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
. 

IELTS essay Immigration has a major impact on society. Opinion essay.

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American English

1 paragraphs

77 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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