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finding out the history of house

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Nowadays, a lot of people in different countries getting interested in exploring the history of their house or build. Actually, there are a lot of reasons could cause that, one of it could be simly to hust feel safe. Begining with this point, some peolpe trying to figuer out if there were any crimes or accedintts happened in the house they are living in, that's because they might feel unsafe until they be sure of that. Other reason could be simply because they just want to know, maybe they don't care at all, but they want to have some fun by finding out the history of their house. Moving on to how they could know that, one effective way could be asking the old nieghbors in the neighbourhood, Moving on to how they could know that, one effective way could be asking the old nieghbors in the neighbourhood, Moving on to how they could know that, one effective way could be asking the old nieghbors in the nieghborhood, most of old people don't like to move a lot from house to another, therefore, it could be the easiest way to figuer out that, other way they could search in the old newspaper of thier region, searching for any unexpected accedint happened in their nieghborhood, but that will probably take them years. In conclusion, everyone may have his own reasons of searching abouth the history of the place he lives in, but he will needs to find out the best way to do that, so he can be confedint.
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countries getting interested in exploring the history of their
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house
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reasons could cause that, one of it could be
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feel safe.

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peolpe
trying to
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out if there were any crimes or
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accedintts
happened in the
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house
they are living in,

that's
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because
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simply
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because
they
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just
want to
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know
, maybe they don't care at all,
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but
they want to have
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some
fun by finding out the history of their
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house
.

Moving on to how they could
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that, one effective way could be asking the
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old
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nieghbors
in the
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most of
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therefore
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out that, other way they could search in the
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newspaper of
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thier
region, searching for any unexpected
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happened in their
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,

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take them years.

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, everyone may have his
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own
reasons of searching
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abouth
the history of the place he
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lives
in,
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he will
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IELTS essay finding out the history of house

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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