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If you could go back to a specific time in the past, what time period would you choose? Why? Give specific reasons for your answer.

If you could go back to a specific time in the past, what time period would you choose? Why? Give specific reasons for your answer. ApkVe
Had I have a chance to go back, I would have selected my childhood. Since, I had carefree childhood. I had very good friends in that time so all time we played with each other without any concerns and just enjoyed our time. At that time my granny was live and she told story and played with me. My uncles paid attention to me because I was so cute and they bought everything that I wanted. I remember that people were so happy and made relationship with each other more than today and they helped each other in different situations. Although nowadays people have more facilities, they heart become black and the others situation is not important for them. To sum up, I love my childhood because it is memorable for me.
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IELTS essay If you could go back to a specific time in the past, what time period would you choose? Why? Give specific reasons for your answer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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