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If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.

If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved. JYdmj
There's a frightening increase in racism and xenophobia around all countries no matter the skin colour, ethnicity or nationality. While being racist or xenophobe is not something you're hereditary born with, we can shift our attention on the overall process of adopting these attitudes and focus on resolving the problems as soon as a pattern starts to develop around them. In the following essay, I will cover the solutions to this problem and how can we strive to be better in society considering that racism and xenophobia is not something you're born with. Each one of us comes into this world pure, uncorrupted and conditioned to love everybody around us. That's why when we were young, we used to share toys, sweets and all sorts of things with anybody no matter their skin colour, race or where they come from. The simple act of sharing, loving and having fun together was enough for us to live in reciprocity and love. Although, along the way, a pattern must have started to develop about racism and xenophobia. These attitudes are not hereditarily adopted but rather are taught from friends, parents, news and they are also the result of peer pressure. These attitudes towards people of different races or nationalities have started to be a serious issue for our society due to the 1900s terrible events that lead to world wars, totalitarian regimes and extreme drawbacks against outsiders. While not all people have these attitudes towards racism and xenophobia it is worth coming up with solutions to this matter. First of all, we must interrupt the pattern for further developing into young children thus the educational system should create a friendly environment for all people and punish every attempt of racism or xenophobia no matter their age. Punishment shouldn't be something out of this world but rather those people should be taught the right moral values, be encouraged to be friendlier to those that are foreigners. Furthermore, this process of teaching the people how to better handle racism and xenophobia should continue in general school, high school, University and especially workplace environments where management and HR should buttress the importance of eliminating racist remarks, xenophobic attitudes and any attempts of denigrating other races, nationalities and people of different colours. In this essay, I proved that although these attitudes are taught and not born with, we can come to understand that by focusing on how to handle racism and xenophobia we can develop solutions and resolve this problem starting from our family, neighbourhood, school, Univesity and work-place focusing on constant feedback from those who feel they're treated unfairly. To conclude, only when we as a society admit that racism and xenophobia still exist among us we can start to resolve these issues that are taught and not born with.
There's a frightening increase in
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racism
and
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xenophobia
around all countries no
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matter
the skin
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colour
, ethnicity or nationality. While being racist or xenophobe is not something you're hereditary born with, we can shift our attention on the
overall
process of adopting these
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attitudes
and focus on resolving the problems as
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soon
as a pattern
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starts
to develop around them. In the following essay, I will cover the solutions to this problem and how can we strive to be better in society considering that
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racism
and
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xenophobia
is not something you're born with. Each one of us
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comes
into this world pure, uncorrupted and conditioned to
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love
everybody around us. That's why when we were young, we
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used
to share toys, sweets and all sorts of things with anybody no
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matter
their skin
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colour
, race or where they
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come
from. The simple act of sharing, loving and having fun together was
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enough
for us to
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live
in reciprocity and
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love
. Although, along the way, a pattern
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must
have
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started
to develop about
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racism
and
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xenophobia
. These
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attitudes
are not
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hereditarily
adopted
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but
rather
are taught
from friends, parents,
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news and
they are
also
the result of peer pressure. These
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attitudes
towards
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people
of
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different
races or nationalities have
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started
to be a serious issue for our society due to the 1900s terrible
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events
that lead to world wars, totalitarian regimes and extreme drawbacks against outsiders. While not all
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people
have these
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attitudes
towards
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racism
and
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xenophobia
it is worth coming up with solutions to this
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matter
.
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First of all
, we
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must
interrupt the pattern for
further
developing into young children
thus
the educational system should create a friendly environment for all
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people
and punish every attempt of
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racism
or
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xenophobia
no
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matter
their age. Punishment shouldn't be something out of this world
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but
rather
those
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people
should
be taught
the right moral values,
be encouraged
to be friendlier to those that are foreigners.
Furthermore
, this process of teaching the
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people
how to better handle
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racism
and
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xenophobia
should continue
in general
school, high school, University and
especially
workplace environments where management and HR should buttress the importance of eliminating racist remarks, xenophobic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attitudes
and any attempts of denigrating other races, nationalities and
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people
of
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different
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colours
. In this essay, I proved that although these
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attitudes
are taught
and not born with, we can
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come
to understand that by focusing on how to handle
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racism
and
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xenophobia
we can develop solutions and resolve this problem starting from our family,
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neighbourhood
, school,
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Univesity
and work-place focusing on constant feedback from those who feel they're treated
unfairly
.
To conclude
,
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only
when we as a society admit that
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racism
and
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xenophobia
still
exist among us we can
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start
to resolve these issues that
are taught
and not born with.
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IELTS essay If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.

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