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Exports of rubber duck in the USA in 2013 started at 10, 000 units and then climbed to around 15, 000 units. after that, export numbers levelled off until 2015 and fall slightly by 2016 to around 13, 000 units. However, from 2016 to 2017 exports fell sharply ending at approximately 2, 000 units. In contrast, the proportion of rubber ducks exports from the EU stood at 30, 000 units and rose gradually but then dipped somewhat in 2015 to 21, 000 units. subsequently, the figure grew steadily to over 33, 000 units in 2016 and peaked at 40, 000 units in 2017. Likewise, in the UK exports rose steadily every year from 2014 ending at 40, 000 units in 2017.
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numbers levelled off until 2015 and fall
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ending at approximately 2, 000
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from the EU stood at 30, 000
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and rose
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then dipped somewhat in 2015 to 21, 000
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subsequently
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in 2016 and peaked at 40, 000
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in 2017.
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rose
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every year from 2014 ending at 40, 000
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IELTS essay Exports of rubber duck different

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121 words
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