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If I had 1 million € to spend but could not spend to myself

Sometimes I have very deeply conversations with my friend. Once we called each other late at night, and she asked me strange and at the same time a very interesting question. What would you do if you had 1 million € but you cannot spend it on yourself? Firstly, I answered easily I would invest it. Nevertheless, she answered me very quickly that the money would sometimes come back to me, which would be the same situation. But then I thought about the answer a little more serious. A few minutes later, I thought, why not invest it for someone to has a better life. The first quarter of that money I would probably donate some organization that helps children who do not have enough money to study because I realized that not everyone is as lucky as me and can have a good education quality. Then I would invest a second quarter of the remaining money in an athlete who also needs help. I know how the sport is expensive, but it is also sad if an athlete can't do what he has the talent and predisposition to, due to the financial situation. I didn´t think long about the last half of 1 million €, and I answered right away. I would invest them in people who have invested in me all my life. My parents. I would indulge them in what they could not afford yet but just dream of it. Moreover, they deserve it more than anyone. To conclude, I would have nothing because the rules were set clearly. I think I would be richer than before because I would have a good feeling which can't be bought or paid for in any way. My answers surprised her in a good way, and she ended it by fully agreeing with me.
Sometimes
I have
very
deeply
conversations with my friend. Once we called each other late at night, and she asked me strange and at the same time a
very
interesting question. What would you do if you had 1 million €
but
you cannot spend it on yourself?

Firstly
, I answered
easily
I would
invest
it.
Nevertheless
, she answered me
very
quickly
that the
money
would
sometimes
come
back to me, which would be the same situation.
But
then I
thought
about the answer a
little
more serious.

A few minutes later, I
thought
, why not
invest
it for someone to has a better life.

The
first
quarter of that
money
I would
probably
donate
some
organization that
helps
children who do not have
enough
money
to study
because
I realized that not everyone is as lucky as me and can have a
good
education quality.

Then I would
invest
a second quarter of the remaining
money
in an athlete who
also
needs
help
. I know how the sport is expensive,
but
it is
also
sad if an athlete can't do what he has the talent and predisposition to, due to the financial situation.

I
didn´t
think
long about the last half of 1 million €, and I answered right away.
I
would
invest
them in
people
who have invested in me all my life. My parents. I would indulge them in what they could not afford
yet
but
just
dream of it.
Moreover
, they deserve it more than anyone.

To conclude
, I would have nothing
because
the
rules
were set
clearly
. I
think
I would be richer than
before
because
I would have a
good
feeling which can't be
bought
or paid for in any way. My answers surprised her in a
good
way, and she ended it by
fully
agreeing with me.
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IELTS essay If I had 1 million € to spend but could not spend to myself

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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