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Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is well know, that fame does not come alone, it comes with a price. In this essay, we will dicuss both views and, I will also provide the major reason as to why the later takes preference over the former view. Fame comes through love from the mass. It is then the right of the public that they expect a glimpse into their personal life which is how media comes into picture. It is their job to capture well known people and earn money by revealing their few personal affairs in public. However, this in return aid celebraties as well in return because the more you are visible on screen the more you become famous irrespective of the information showed on screen is veracious or not. Once a person receives fame, he/she cannot hide from the limelight. This popularity not only brings pride but also invites invasion into their personal life. People have to be open to some extent without getting thwarted because fame comes from the people, for the people and by the people. This is a very small price one has to pay to receiving much of love, wealth and delight. I believe, media is just a medium to acquaint the information till public but it is common people whose intension is to get some or the other information about the populare faces they like. The media is doing its job and i also believe even people like celebrities, politicians or any illustrious person would like to show their life to some extent in public

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well know
, that fame does not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializehitappeargetmovereach
come
 alone, it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializehitappeargetmovereach
comes
 with a price. In this essay, we will Possible spelling mistake found.discuss
dicuss
 both views and, I will also
 provide the major reason as to why the Did you mean “latter” (=the second of two items)?latter
later
 takes preference over the former view.

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comes
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love
 from the mass. It is then the right of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 a glimpse into their personal life which is how media You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializehitappeargetmovereach
comes
 into picture. It is their job to capture well known You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and earn money by revealing their few personal affairs in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
. However
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celebraties
as well
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because
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famous
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showed
 on screen is veracious or not.

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hide
 from the limelight. This popularity not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 brings pride This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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People
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have to
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some
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because
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comes
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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people
. This is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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small
 price one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 pay to receiving much of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, wealth and delight.

I believe, media is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a medium to acquaint the information till You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
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but
 it is common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 whose Possible spelling mistake found.intentionin tension
intension
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get
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some
 or the other information about the Possible spelling mistake found.popularpopulacepopulate
populare
 faces they like. The media is doing its job and Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
also
 believe even You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 like celebrities, politicians or any illustrious person would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their life to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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