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If I could change the education system, what changes would I make to the curriculum

To educate and teach students about skills that would help them in the future like how to pay taxes, financial budgets, investing, loans. Teach students about coping with mental health, how to be more in touch with themselves and their feelings. Teach to test mentality, it doesn’t teach/help students learn but how to pass a test. It causes stress and anxiousness and puts tremendous pressure on students. (we cannot embrace failure in a system that punishes it). Include more imaginative play and less testing. Teach Self Defence is extremely important, if you are ever stuck in a situation where you are your only saviour you should know how to defend yourself. Teach sign language, although It would enable a large amount of people in our community feel included in everyday life. promotes better awareness of and sensitivity to the deaf and hard of hearing community. As someone proficient in ASL, you will develop a strong appreciation for deaf culture, and you can promote understanding and acceptance of the language among others.

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students
 about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 that would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them in the future like how to pay taxes, financial budgets, investing, loans.

Teach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 about coping with mental health, how to be more in touch with themselves and their feelings.

Teach to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
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help
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students
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but
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test
. It causes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and anxiousness and puts tremendous pressure on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. (we cannot embrace failure in a system that punishes it). Include more imaginative play and less testing.

Teach Self Possible spelling mistake. 'Defence' is British English.Defense
Defence
 is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
, if you are ever stuck in a situation where you are your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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saviour
 you should know how to defend yourself.

Teach This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 language, although It would enable a large amount of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in our community feel included in everyday life.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPromotes
promotes
 better awareness of and sensitivity to the deaf and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 of hearing community. As someone proficient in ASL, you will develop a strong appreciation for deaf culture, and you can promote understanding and acceptance of the language among others. 