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I write with reference to the recent decision

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I write with reference to the recent decision which has been taken by the council to stopping function of the leisure center. I’d like to notice you that our family members and my colleagues daily use the services which are being provided with the high standard up to the current date. This is an essential service which gives the lot of benefits to the local society. Most of members are really enjoying facility which can be accessed with the wide range sports and other activities. Because, this kind of location is helped to maintain the better health conditions and low stress levels among the community. In addition, families enjoy the free time with their kids in the peaceful atmosphere. Due to the fact, various type of negative feedbacks can be come across if you decide to stop the functions of the center. Specially, decision will be impacted to the children’s physical life which is critical. Not only that, a number of adults will get poor health conditions which they will not have a place to maintain their medical conditions.

I write with reference to the recent decision which has been taken
 by the council to stopping function of the leisure center. I’d like to notice you that our family members and my colleagues daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the services which are being provided
 with the high standard up to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 date.

This is an essential service which gives the lot of benefits to the local society. After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the members") or simply say "Most members".Most of the membersMost members
Most of members
 are really
 enjoying facility which can be accessed
 with the wide range sports and other activities. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, this kind of location is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 to maintain the better health conditions and low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 levels among the community. In addition
, families enjoy the free time with their kids in the peaceful atmosphere.

Due to the fact, various type of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 feedbacks can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across if you decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 the functions of the center. Specially
, decision will be impacted
 to the children’s physical life which is critical. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 that, a number of adults will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 poor health conditions which they will not have a place to maintain their medical conditions. 