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Decribe a street market.

Decribe a street market. xgEMa
Well, Street markets are extremely popular in my country. people are buy something various places like mall, road side shops and local markets. Most of economical weak persons want to buy in road side shops and street market. However, rich citizens buy anything in the mall. Well, Street markets are popular among youngsters. So here i would like to talk about one of the most famous local market in my city, it name is chuta bazar which is located in center of surat. It is open entire week. However, it gets really crowded, especially on the weekends. Where is located many shops. Furthermore, many hawkers are come and sell their products. People can buy almost anything at this place like beauty products, mobile accessory, footwear, toys, clothes, etc. Many distinguish types of food stalls are there. Although, it is not wholesome food but apart from me this food is very delicious. When i go there that time i definitely try it. Recently, two months ago i used to go there and i saw lot's of new fashion clothes were there so i bought some traditional clothes for my brother wedding. So overall it is a wonderful and a famous street market of my city that people love to visit to do their shopping.
Well,
Street
markets are
extremely
popular in my country.
people
are
buy
something various places like mall, road side shops and local markets. Most of economical weak persons want to
buy
in road side shops and
street
market
.
However
, rich citizens
buy
anything in the mall. Well,
Street
markets are popular among youngsters.
So
here
i
would like to talk about one of the most
famous
local
market
in my city, it
name
is
chuta
bazar
which
is located
in center of
surat
. It is open entire week.
However
, it
gets
really crowded
,
especially
on the weekends.

Where
is located
many
shops.
Furthermore
,
many
hawkers are
come
and sell their products.

People
can
buy
almost anything at this place like beauty products, mobile accessory, footwear, toys, clothes, etc.
Many
distinguish types of food stalls are there. Although, it is not wholesome food
but
apart from me this food is
very
delicious.
When
i
go there that time
i
definitely try it. Recently, two months ago
i
used
to go there and
i
saw
lot's
of new fashion clothes were there
so
i
bought
some
traditional clothes for my brother wedding.

So
overall
it is a wonderful and a
famous
street
market
of my city that
people
love
to visit to do their shopping.
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IELTS essay Decribe a street market.

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