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I want to talk about healthy food

I want to talk about healthy food 8Q30P
Healthy food is food that contains vitamines and other beneficial minerals to the human's body, healthy food has many advantages for the health of people. one of these advantages is improving one's body and mind as well as it strengthen the muscles. one disadvantage is the high price of the natural food which many people can not afford it. Healthy food is food that contains vitamines and other beneficial minerals to the human's body, healthy food has many advantages for the health of people. one of these advantages is improving one's body and mind as well as it strengthen the muscles. one disadvantage is the high price of the natural food which many people can not afford it.
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disadvantage is the high price of the natural
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Healthy
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food
is
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food
that contains
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vitamines
and other beneficial minerals to the human's
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body
,
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healthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
has
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many
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advantages
for the health of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

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one
of these
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advantages
is improving one's
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body
and mind
as well
as it strengthen the muscles.

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one
disadvantage is the high price of the natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can not afford it.
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IELTS essay I want to talk about healthy food

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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