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i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers

i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers but some of the organization or company does not provide dress and this situation when dress is nessery employer buy their dress from their own money there are the reason some that's i disagree with this

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buy
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some of the
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IELTS essay i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

71 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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