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i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers

i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers owXV
i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers but some of the organization or company does not provide dress and this situation when dress is nessery employer buy their dress from their own money there are the reason some that's i disagree with this
i
totally
agree
with this statement that uniform in job sector was
good
for their job and look
smartly
also
dress
are expensive to
buy
if
company
or any organization should provide
dress
to their employers
but
some of the
organization or
company
does not provide
dress
and this situation when
dress
is
nessery
employer
buy
their
dress
from their
own
money there are the reason
some
that's
i
disagree with this
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IELTS essay i totally agree with this statement that uniform in job sector was good for their job and look smartly also dress are expensive to buy if company or any organization should provide dress to their employers

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  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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