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I now want to apply on 2 scholarship that I have right now.

I now want to apply on 2 scholarship that I have right now. First, I need to apply on SBW scholarshipand for that I need to check from recommendation letters and I need to write a motivation letter and I need to answer some short question about different topics and finally to write all my information. Second, I need to apply on Turkish scholarship. So I will use same motivation letter and recommendation letters. And I need to filter universities and make sure that all my information there are correct and I need to modify some things there. Third, I will apply on Islamic bank scholarship and I think for that I need my CV and some things simple. I remember that I was spent an hour only on application and then I got reject. So that the scholarship that I need to apply on it. And ai think and believe that the studying in Saudi universities is much better than Turkey universities. So I prefer to study here and do not go far away.

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now
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apply
 on 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheducationexpertiseschooling
scholarship
 that I have right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

First
, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministerspreadcover
apply
 on Possible spelling mistake found.SAWSBSSBCSOWSBASBB
SBW
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scholarshipand
 for that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 from recommendation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letters
 and I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to write a motivation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letter
 and I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to answer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 short question about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 topics and finally
 to write all my information.

Second, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministerspreadcover
apply
 on Turkish You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheducationexpertiseschooling
scholarship
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 same motivation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letter
 and recommendation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letters
. And I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to filter universities and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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correct and
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to modify This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 things there.

Third, I will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministerspreadcover
apply
 on Islamic bank You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheducationexpertiseschooling
scholarship
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 for that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 my CV and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 things simple. I remember that I was spent
 an hour This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).application, and
application and
 then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 reject.

“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheducationexpertiseschooling
scholarship
 that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministerspreadcover
apply
 on it. And Possible spelling mistake found.AIaIasatan
ai
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 and believe that the studying in Saudi universities is much better than Turkey universities. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I prefer to study here and do not go far away. 