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Opening speech for Tempe Day Seminar

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Assalamualaikum warahmatullahi wabarakatuh, good morning everyone. Let me introduce myself, my name is Rahma Jamilah. Here i will be the host for Tempe Day Seminar. Tempe day is held at 6th june 2021. so DPP Persagi holding seminars as a form of commemoration. without wasting time I opened this seminar by saying Bismillahirrahmanirrahim. Then I give time and place to the moderator to read the speaker's cv and take control
Assalamualaikum
warahmatullahi
wabarakatuh
,
good
morning everyone.
Let
me introduce myself, my name is
Rahma
Jamilah
. Here
i
will be the host for Tempe Day Seminar. Tempe day
is held
at 6th
june
2021.
so
DPP
Persagi
holding seminars as a form of commemoration.
without
wasting time I opened this seminar by saying
Bismillahirrahmanirrahim
. Then I give time and place to the moderator to read the speaker's
cv
and take
control
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IELTS essay Opening speech for Tempe Day Seminar

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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