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I love voice messaging ...

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I believe that voice messages are good option to texting one to better explain the things we are talking about. Sometimes text messages could be misundertood beacause it is not easy to deduce the real intention, or the real purpose for which they are written. On the other hand there are a lot of situations in which you are not able to listen the message and it could be useful associate them to a text messages with an anticipation of the argument that you have sent in voice message. But, I am convinced that in some situation, if the voice message will be not enought to explain the argument and we need more details about it, we can give someone a call rather than text back. In the end, I do prefer the short voice messages because when I receive long messages, I have often forgotten the information before I ended to listen it.
I believe that
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are
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option to texting one to better
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explain
the things we are talking about.
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Sometimes
text
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could be
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misundertood
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beacause
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On the other hand
there are
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a lot of
situations in which you are not able to listen the
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and it could be useful associate them to a text
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messages
with an anticipation of the argument that you have
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sent
in
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voice
message.

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, I
am convinced
that in
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some
situation, if the
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voice
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message
will be not
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enought
to
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explain
the
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argument and
we need more
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details
about it, we can give someone a call
rather
than text back.

In the
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end
, I do prefer the short
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voice
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because
when I receive long
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, I have
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forgotten the information
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I ended to listen it.

IELTS essay I love voice messaging ...

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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