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I hold a B.Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?

I hold a B. Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution? RN0P8
I hold a B. Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?
I hold a
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B. Sc.
Biochemistry (third
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) and a Postgraduate Diploma in
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Social
Work from the Institute of
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Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a
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Social
Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010.
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want to
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Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?
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IELTS essay I hold a B. Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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