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I have always been a boy with a mathematical mindset.

I have always been a boy with a mathematical mindset. I always had big problems studying history, foreign languages, and biology, but it was easier for me to memorize and understand formulas and solve logic problems, so I looked forward to mathematics, physics, and computer science lessons. As a child, when I was about 7-8 years old, my father bought a computer to do his work. It was Dell Optiplex 780. As a kid who had never seen a computer, I was dying of curiosity to know what it was made of and how it worked. Then my way of studying the computer began. I watched how my father typed his work on a computer. It looked like a small magic box on a table in the corner. My father was very good at it. He would even fix it himself by taking out everything inside and putting the back and I always sat and looked at what he was doing. Over time, I myself began to fix minor ailments, and sometimes in order to understand the functions of each device I intentionally took away it and saw what would happen to the computer. I must admit that I did not always succeed in understanding the reason. I would always be bombarded with questions that even my dad couldn’t understand. I wanted to know how the mouse arrow moves across the screen, how the computer understands what exactly I pressed. I was amazed at how quickly the computer responded to commands and how such a small machine was able to calculate large numbers in a matter of seconds. However, it was not until I was in Grade 8, I could get answers to my questions. Due to the change in schools, it was difficult for me to understand the programming. When I was studying in Russia, we started learning computer science in the 8th grade. And a year later I had to return home to Uzbekistan, where they began to study computer science in the 6th grade. This made it difficult for me to understand the 9th-grade curriculum. But despite this, I was able to master the base. Realizing that I was far behind, I began to prepare on my own. I reread all the school textbooks and stayed after class to catch up with my peers and I also enrolled in online classes. I believe that motivation for a goal is temporary, but persistence and curiosity together can then help a person in self-development. I am sure there are many challenges ahead of me to go through, but as long as curiosity and perseverance live in me, I will always be ready to overcome all obstacles.
I have always been a boy with a mathematical mindset. I always had
big
problems studying history, foreign languages, and biology,
but
it was easier for me to memorize and
understand
formulas and solve logic problems,
so
I looked forward to mathematics, physics, and computer science lessons. As a child, when I was about 7-8 years
old
, my father
bought
a computer to do his work. It was Dell
Optiplex
780. As a kid who had never
seen
a computer, I was dying of curiosity to know what it
was made
of and how it worked. Then my way of studying the computer
began
. I
watched
how my father typed his work on a computer. It looked like a
small
magic box on a table in the corner. My father was
very
good
at it. He would even
fix
it himself by taking out everything inside and putting the back and I always sat and looked at what he was doing. Over time, I myself
began
to
fix
minor ailments, and
sometimes
in order to
understand
the functions of each device I
intentionally
took away it and
saw
what would happen to the computer. I
must
admit that I did not always succeed in understanding the reason. I would always
be bombarded
with questions that even my dad couldn’t
understand
.
I
wanted to know how the mouse arrow
moves
across the screen, how the computer
understands
what exactly I pressed.
I
was amazed
at how
quickly
the computer responded to commands and how such a
small
machine was able to calculate large numbers in a matter of seconds.

However
, it was not until I was in Grade 8, I could
get
answers to my questions. Due to the
change
in schools, it was difficult for me to
understand
the programming. When I was studying in Russia, we
started
learning computer science in the 8th grade. And a year later I had to return home to Uzbekistan, where they
began
to study computer science in the 6th grade. This made it difficult for me to
understand
the 9th-grade curriculum.
But
despite this, I was able to master the base. Realizing that I was far behind, I
began
to prepare on my
own
. I reread all the school textbooks and stayed after
class
to catch up with my peers and I
also
enrolled in online classes.

I believe that motivation for a goal is temporary,
but
persistence and curiosity together can then
help
a person in self-development.
I
am sure there are
many
challenges ahead of me to go through,
but
as long as curiosity and perseverance
live
in me, I will always be ready to overcome all obstacles.
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IELTS essay I have always been a boy with a mathematical mindset.

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5.5
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