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2. Do you agree that studying abroad brings many benefits

Tourism can create lots of different types of jobs. This is because they involve providing a service to other people, particularly in rural areas and developing countries. Moreover, it provides modern facilities that can help the tourist more comfortable when they travel. However, there are some drawbacks of this. New areas of land need to be cleared for new hotels and roads, meanwhile animals lose their natural habitat and have to move to a new location. A number of vehicles, higher levels of noise, deforestation and pollution disturb the ecological balance are increased significantly in every tourist attraction.

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 in rural areas and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
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help
 the tourist more comfortable when they travel.

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some
 drawbacks of this. New areas of land need to be cleared
 for new hotels and roads, meanwhile animals lose their natural habitat and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
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move
 to a new location. A number of vehicles, higher levels of noise, deforestation and pollution disturb the ecological balance are increased
significantly
 in every tourist attraction. 