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I believe it’s the vehicle that all nations should invest in as the priority part of the country's strategy. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of the sky train.

I believe it’s the vehicle that all nations should invest in as the priority part of the country's strategy. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of the sky train. 1m6dL
In the modern days, sky trains are becoming more and more popular in every city as the indispensable public transport in daily life. Although sky train has both benefits and drawbacks. I believe it’s the vehicle that all nations should invest in as the priority part of the country's strategy. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of the sky train. On the one hand, there are several benefits of building sky trains. One of its primary benefits is that it may be able to decrease the number of private vehicles participating in the traffic. Sky train is one means of public transportation, so it can serve a number of dwellers which means fewer commuters use private vehicles, resulting in a lower rate of traffic congestion. Another advantage of the overhead railroad is that it occupies minimal land compared to other kinds of transport. Hence, they leave enough space for other forms of ground transport and eventually reduce the traffic jams. On the other hand, there are many negative sides of overhead trains that cannot be overlooked. One of them is that constructing this kind of railway costs exorbitantly. Building this system demands a variety of expenses such as hiring highly qualified engineers and buying a number of expensive materials. Therefore, constructing the sky railways tends to consume a large amount of the government’s budget, so it’s not the best option for developing countries with financial constraints. Besides, the limited destination is another drawback that people usually think about. The sky train has a fixed destination, so people are forced to walk or use a second vehicle to reach the other destinations, which leads to inconvenience for passengers. In conclusion, although the sky trains may have some cons, if the government coordinates it with other transportation systems, the traffic issues in big cities could be solved.
In the modern days, sky
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trains
are becoming more and more popular in every city as the indispensable public transport in daily life. Although sky
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train
has both benefits and drawbacks. I believe it’s the
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vehicle
that all nations should invest in as the priority part of the country's strategy.
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Let
’s
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begin
by looking at the advantages of the sky train.

On the one hand, there are several benefits of building sky
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trains
. One of its primary benefits is that it may be able to decrease the number of private
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vehicles
participating in the
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traffic
. Sky
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train
is one means of public transportation,
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so
it can serve a number of dwellers which means fewer commuters
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use
private
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vehicles
, resulting in a lower rate of
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traffic
congestion. Another advantage of the overhead railroad is that it occupies minimal land compared to
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other
kinds of transport.
Hence
, they
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leave
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enough
space for
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other
forms of ground transport and
eventually
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reduce
the
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traffic
jams.

On the
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other
hand, there are
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many
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negative
sides of overhead
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trains
that cannot
be overlooked
. One of them is that constructing this kind of railway costs
exorbitantly
. Building this system demands a variety of expenses such as hiring
highly
qualified engineers and buying a number of expensive materials.
Therefore
, constructing the sky railways tends to consume a large amount of the
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government
’s budget,
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so
it’s not the best option for
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developing countries
with financial constraints.
Besides
, the limited destination is another drawback that
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people
usually
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think
about. The sky
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train
has a
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fixed
destination,
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so
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people
are forced
to walk or
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use
a second
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vehicle
to reach the
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other
destinations, which leads to inconvenience for passengers.

In conclusion
, although the sky
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trains
may have
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some
cons, if the
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government
coordinates it with
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other
transportation systems, the
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traffic
issues in
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big
cities could
be solved
.

IELTS essay I believe it’s the vehicle that all nations should invest in as the priority part of the country's strategy. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of the sky train.

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306 words
6.0
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