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I am an Indian and being Indian, I can say India is a developing country and Advertising is a major sector in my country. Advertising has its own pros and cons so some people belives that advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary stuff and some people have a different point of view, according to them it gives us a lot of information about new products. In my opinion, advertising the new product is extremely helpful for us. As we all are working from home so only advertising can help us to know better not only about new products launching in the market but also we get the detail information about the product such as its price, availability and may more. Moreover, we can order the product by sitting at home. there are a lot of advantages, firstly we don't need to go to the market and do shopping, secondly, we can compare products before buying them and take an appropriate decision on our own. we don't need to visit a store personally for product look and feel and also comparison

I am an Indian and being Indian, I can say India is a developing country and Advertising is a major sector in my country. Advertising has its own pros and cons so some people belives that advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary stuff and some people have a different point of view, according to them it gives us a lot of information about new products. In my opinion, advertising the new product is extremely helpful for us. As we all are working from home so only advertising can help us to know better not only about new products launching in the market but also we get the detail information about the product such as its price, availability and may more. Moreover, we can order the product by sitting at home. there are a lot of advantages, firstly we don't need to go to the market and do shopping, secondly, we can compare products before buying them and take an appropriate decision on our own. we don't need to visit a store personally for product look and feel and also comparison 9L5Ep
I am an Indian and being Indian, I can say India is a developing country and Advertising is a major sector in my country. Advertising has its own pros and cons so some people belives that advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary stuff and some people have a different point of view, according to them it gives us a lot of information about new products. In my opinion, advertising the new product is extremely helpful for us. As we all are working from home so only advertising can help us to know better not only about new products launching in the market but also we get the detail information about the product such as its price, availability and may more. Moreover, we can order the product by sitting at home. there are a lot of advantages, firstly we don't need to go to the market and do shopping, secondly, we can compare products before buying them and take an appropriate decision on our own. we don't need to visit a store personally for product look and feel and also comparison purpose. Advertising has improved our lives. here I would like to talk about my experience, due to covid since last year I am doing online shopping a lot. It makes my life very easy and comfortable. If we got the wrong product my mistaken, they will give us a new product or refund as per our choice. I am living with my parents and they are above 60 plus age so I don't want to take risk of going out and buy products. I used to shop online earlier also but not as the same as I am doing now. I have ordered a lot of products online and I have been using them for a long time without any issues. So I strongly recommend advertising.
I am an Indian and being Indian, I can say India is a
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developing country
and Advertising is a major sector in my country.

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own
pros and cons
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people
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belives
that advertising encourages us to
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buy
unnecessary stuff and
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some
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people
have a
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different
point of view, according to them it gives us a
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lot
of information about
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new
products.

In my opinion, advertising the
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new
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product
is
extremely
helpful for us. As we all are working from home
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so
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only
advertising can
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help
us to know better not
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only
about
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new
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products
launching in the market
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but
also
we
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get
the detail information about the
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product
such as its price, availability and may more.

Moreover
, we can order the
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product
by sitting at home.

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there
are a
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lot
of advantages,
firstly
we don't need to go to the market and
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do shopping
,
secondly
, we can compare
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products
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before
buying them and take an appropriate decision on our
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own
.
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we
don't need to visit a store
personally
for
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product
look and feel and
also
comparison purpose.

Advertising has
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improved
our
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lives
.
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here
I would like to talk about my experience, due to
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covid
since last year I am doing online shopping a
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lot
. It
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makes
my life
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very
easy and comfortable.

If we
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got
the
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wrong
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product
my mistaken, they will give us a
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new
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product
or refund as per our choice.

I am living with my
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parents and
they are above 60 plus age
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so
I don't want to take
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risk
of going out and
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buy
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products
. I
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used
to shop online earlier
also
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but
not as the same as I am doing
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now
.
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I
have ordered a
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lot
of
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products
online and I have been using them for a long time without any issues.

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So
I
strongly
recommend advertising.
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IELTS essay I am an Indian and being Indian, I can say India is a developing country and Advertising is a major sector in my country. Advertising has its own pros and cons so some people belives that advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary stuff and some people have a different point of view, according to them it gives us a lot of information about new products. In my opinion, advertising the new product is extremely helpful for us. As we all are working from home so only advertising can help us to know better not only about new products launching in the market but also we get the detail information about the product such as its price, availability and may more. Moreover, we can order the product by sitting at home. there are a lot of advantages, firstly we don't need to go to the market and do shopping, secondly, we can compare products before buying them and take an appropriate decision on our own. we don't need to visit a store personally for product look and feel and also comparison

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
306 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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