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humankind should just habituate to live with the breakdown, instead of avoiding the climatic emergency

humankind should just habituate to live with the breakdown, instead of avoiding the climatic emergency ldA89
It is stated that, people are ought to adapt to the climatic variability, rather than mitigating the crisis in the atmosphere. However, in my judgement, while I believe that people should adapt to the climatic emergency, the humans are mostly responsible to diminish the variability in weather conditions instead of just adapting to the changes in atmosphere. Therefore, I disagree that humankind should just habituate to live with the breakdown, instead of avoiding the climatic emergency. Mankind is increasingly influencing the climate and earth’s temperature by burning fossil fuels, deforestation, deficiency in land management and so forth. Moreover, at some point the adaptability and endurability can reach to a peak where people could adapt no more. In recent days, the road authority had decided to construct a highway across our city and it headed to a flooding in the area after ages. It was a sudden incident and no one had time to adapt to the situation. Some were died, many lost their homes and the spread of diseases became more common. Therefore, such kind of disasters would not happen if the decisions were made accurately by considering the climatic changes. Therefore, more the climate changes, the harder it could be. But in case if we are too late to prevent the climate changes, the need for adaptation is the only option. As in the previous example, since the construction of the highway caused flooding, now the most efficient solution would be adaptation which is settling in another safe region. To conclude, even though the adaptation is necessary, as responsible humans it would be better to grab early solutions to mitigate the atmospheric changes rather than just adapting to the variability.
It
is stated
that,
people
are ought to
adapt
to the
climatic
variability,
rather
than mitigating the crisis in the atmosphere.
However
, in my judgement, while I believe that
people
should
adapt
to the
climatic
emergency, the humans are
mostly
responsible to diminish the variability in weather conditions
instead
of
just
adapting to the
changes
in atmosphere.
Therefore
, I disagree that humankind should
just
habituate to
live
with the breakdown,
instead
of avoiding the
climatic
emergency.

Mankind is
increasingly
influencing the climate and earth’s temperature by burning fossil fuels, deforestation, deficiency in land management and
so
forth.
Moreover
, at
some
point the adaptability and
endurability
can reach to a peak where
people
could
adapt
no more. In recent days, the road authority had decided to construct a highway across our city and it headed to a flooding in the area after ages. It was a sudden incident and no one had time to
adapt
to the situation.
Some
were
died
,
many
lost their homes and the spread of diseases became more common.
Therefore
, such kind of disasters would not happen if the decisions
were made
accurately
by considering the
climatic
changes
.
Therefore
, more the climate
changes
, the harder it could be.

But
in case if we are too late to
prevent
the climate
changes
, the need for adaptation is the
only
option.

As in the previous example, since the construction of the highway caused flooding,
now
the most efficient solution would be adaptation which is settling in another safe region.

To conclude
,
even though
the adaptation is necessary, as responsible humans it would be better to grab early solutions to mitigate the atmospheric
changes
rather
than
just
adapting to the variability.
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IELTS essay humankind should just habituate to live with the breakdown, instead of avoiding the climatic emergency

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