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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. 7aLW2
A numerous activities done by public is directly and indirectly impact the nature. Few claim that it is no use of taking care as damage happened, but some set of groups strongly believe that by doing and protecting the nature at least now, will definitely heel the atmosphere. I strongly agree with this point, will discuss on the same and provide conclusion in the end. To begin with, there are more number of chances to save the nature and mankind by adapting nature friendly ways. For instance, if public starts using the car pools and public transportation, then the hazardous gases will not release in the environment, recently during the lockdown period, most of the people were stick to homes, due that nature healed herself to some extent and the purity of air has been increased in at most places. If this continues, there are huge number of chances to get polluted free air to our future generations. In addition, Companies should not release harmful waste discharge to the oceans, as doing so, most of unique species are already disappeared, if that goes further, there would not be any sort off living beings in the sea water. Furthermore, country has been become like concrete jungle by deforestation for just survival of humans. They are not concerning about our descendants, they does not know about trees, shades and their uses. They will be in a situation to have all pesticides food, nevertheless they can not enjoy the environment without any contamination. To conclude on this, if we get habituate to guarding the nature, the same will be learnt by next generations then nature will be cured herself.
A numerous
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "activity"?
activities
done by public is
directly
and
indirectly
impact the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
.
Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: "Few claims".
Few claim
that it is no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of taking care as damage happened,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
set of groups
strongly
believe that by doing and protecting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
at least
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, will definitely heel the atmosphere. I
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this point, will discuss on the same and provide conclusion in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, there are more number of chances to save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
and mankind by adapting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
friendly ways.
For instance
, if public
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
using the car pools and public transportation, then the hazardous gases will not release in the environment, recently during the lockdown period, most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
were stick to homes, due that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
healed herself to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent and the purity of air has
been increased
in at most places. If this continues, there are huge number of chances to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
polluted free air to our future generations.

In addition
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Companies
should not release harmful waste discharge to the oceans, as doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, most of unique species are already disappeared, if that goes
further
, there would not be any
Did you mean "sort of"?
sort off
living beings in the sea water.
Furthermore
, country has
been become
like concrete jungle by deforestation for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
survival of humans. They
The verb 'concerning' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are not concerning
about our descendants, they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "do"
does
not know about trees, shades and their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
. They will be in a situation to have all
Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "pesticides'" or "pesticide's"?
pesticides
food,
nevertheless
they can not enjoy the environment without any contamination.
To conclude
on this, if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
habituate to guarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
, the same will be
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
by
next
generations then
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
will
be cured
herself.
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IELTS essay Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation.

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