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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. 7aLW2
A numerous activities done by public is directly and indirectly impact the nature. Few claim that it is no use of taking care as damage happened, but some set of groups strongly believe that by doing and protecting the nature at least now, will definitely heel the atmosphere. I strongly agree with this point, will discuss on the same and provide conclusion in the end. To begin with, there are more number of chances to save the nature and mankind by adapting nature friendly ways. For instance, if public starts using the car pools and public transportation, then the hazardous gases will not release in the environment, recently during the lockdown period, most of the people were stick to homes, due that nature healed herself to some extent and the purity of air has been increased in at most places. If this continues, there are huge number of chances to get polluted free air to our future generations. In addition, Companies should not release harmful waste discharge to the oceans, as doing so, most of unique species are already disappeared, if that goes further, there would not be any sort off living beings in the sea water. Furthermore, country has been become like concrete jungle by deforestation for just survival of humans. They are not concerning about our descendants, they does not know about trees, shades and their uses. They will be in a situation to have all pesticides food, nevertheless they can not enjoy the environment without any contamination. To conclude on this, if we get habituate to guarding the nature, the same will be learnt by next generations then nature will be cured herself.
A numerous
activities
done by public is
directly
and
indirectly
impact the
nature
.
Few claim
that it is no
use
of taking care as damage happened,
but
some
set of groups
strongly
believe that by doing and protecting the
nature
at least
now
, will definitely heel the atmosphere. I
strongly
agree
with this point, will discuss on the same and provide conclusion in the
end
.

To
begin
with, there are more number of chances to save the
nature
and mankind by adapting
nature
friendly ways.
For instance
, if public
starts
using the car pools and public transportation, then the hazardous gases will not release in the environment, recently during the lockdown period, most of the
people
were stick to homes, due that
nature
healed herself to
some
extent and the purity of air has
been increased
in at most places. If this continues, there are huge number of chances to
get
polluted free air to our future generations.

In addition
,
Companies
should not release harmful waste discharge to the oceans, as doing
so
, most of unique species are already disappeared, if that goes
further
, there would not be any
sort off
living beings in the sea water.
Furthermore
, country has
been become
like concrete jungle by deforestation for
just
survival of humans. They
are not concerning
about our descendants, they
does
not know about trees, shades and their
uses
. They will be in a situation to have all
pesticides
food,
nevertheless
they can not enjoy the environment without any contamination.
To conclude
on this, if we
get
habituate to guarding the
nature
, the same will be
learnt
by
next
generations then
nature
will
be cured
herself.
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IELTS essay Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation.

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