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hrough public manufacture. 55mJB
In the development of each country, many are area showing a greatest nation through public manufacture. It is argue that is it necessary to have a large outdoor public area, like parks ar squares for all cities and towns. I somewhat agree with publice space should be available for each city or town. Its argue that the power from nuclear power is better than other resources in the meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. I somewhat agree with this viewpoint as it is the best solution to increasing the energy for the demand of all citizens although it is also one of the limited sources in the earth In nowadays, many people keeping pets to live together with them at home is become widely and this activities have rise several in many countries, while the alternative stances that it is the bad idea. the purpose of this esay is to discusss both sides of this contentious argument and then explain why I agree with the first view
In the development of each country,
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many
are area showing
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a
greatest nation through public manufacture. It is
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argue
that is
it necessary to have a large outdoor public area, like parks
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ar
squares for all cities and towns. I somewhat
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agree
with
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publice
space should be available for each city or town.

Its argue that the power from nuclear power is better than other resources in the meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. I somewhat
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agree
with this viewpoint as it is the best solution to increasing the energy for the demand of all citizens although it is
also
one of the limited sources in the
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earth


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In nowadays
,
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many
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people
keeping pets to
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live
together with them at home
is become
widely
and
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this
activities have rise several in
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many
countries, while the alternative stances that it is the
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bad
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idea
.
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the
purpose of this
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esay
is to
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discusss
both sides of this contentious argument and then
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explain
why I
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agree
with the
first
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view
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IELTS essay hrough public manufacture.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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