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however, others do not concur with this appeal. when will this may not even mertropolis metropolis discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with this

however, others do not concur with this appeal. when will this may not even mertropolis metropolis discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with this KVRmL
With the advent of global warming and pollution in cities, the alternatives for vehicles such cars and bikes are being searched and bicycles are found to be the most efficient source to travel short distances. As a result, a number of individuals opine that bicycles are the optimum mode of transport in metropolis, however, others do not concur with this appeal. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with this mode of transport and present my opinion. Bicycles yield numerous advantages such as increased physical activity and no emission of harmful gases and thus causing no pollution. Firstly, these days as our fitness levels are eroding, bicycles can help to maintain our health. For example, a study revealed that if one cycles about 3 to 4 kilometre daily, he does not needs perform any other type of exercise. Furthermore, commuting through these means is environmentally friendly because no harmful pollutants are released in the atmosphere while riding a cycle and it will certainly help to protect the environment. Therefore, commuting in the metropolis through bicycles can assist us improve our health and play a part in preserving the nature. However, sometimes they cause serious trouble to us such as problems of bike theft. Since bicycles are light weight, they can easily be stolen. For instance, in Germany, there were numerous bicycle thefts due its omnipresent usage. Moreover, in situation of emergency, we will not be able to increase their velocity since they cannot be driven swiftly. Overall, this medium of transport might not be useful and beneficial each time. In my honest opinion, utilization of such bikes will be helpful to us to reduce the problem of air contamination and meanwhile the development of some security instruments and electric accelerators will help to reduce the disadvantages associated with it. In conclusion, although there are few demerits linked with cycle usage such as chances of theft and limited speed, they can easily be tackled through some inventions and this mode of transport can be used in a full-fledged manner.
With the advent of global warming and pollution in cities, the alternatives for vehicles such cars and bikes are
being searched
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
are found
to be the most efficient source to travel short distances.
As a result
, a number of individuals opine that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
are the optimum mode of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
in metropolis,
however
, others do not concur with this appeal. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with this mode of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
and present my opinion.

Bicycles yield numerous advantages such as increased physical activity and no emission of harmful gases and
thus
causing no pollution.
Firstly
, these days as our fitness levels are eroding,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to maintain our health.
For example
, a study revealed that if one cycles about 3 to 4
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kilometre
daily, he does not
The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: "need"
needs
perform any other type of exercise.
Furthermore
, commuting through these means is
environmentally
friendly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
no harmful pollutants
are released
in the atmosphere while riding a cycle and it will
certainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to protect the environment.
Therefore
, commuting in the metropolis through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
can assist us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our health and play a part in preserving the nature.

However
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
they cause serious trouble to us such as problems of bike theft. Since
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
are light weight, they can
easily
be stolen
.
For instance
, in Germany, there were numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
thefts due its omnipresent usage.
Moreover
, in situation of emergency, we will not be able to increase their velocity since they cannot
be driven
swiftly
.
Overall
, this medium of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
might not be useful and beneficial each time.

In my honest opinion, utilization of such bikes will be helpful to us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the problem of air contamination and meanwhile the development of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
security instruments and electric accelerators will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the disadvantages associated with it.

In conclusion
, although there are few demerits linked with cycle usage such as chances of theft and limited speed, they can
easily
be tackled
through
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
inventions and this mode of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
Consider replacing "in a full-fledged manner" with the adverb for "full-fledged"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a full-fledged manner
.
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IELTS essay however, others do not concur with this appeal. when will this may not even mertropolis metropolis discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with this

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
340 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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