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how your interest and skills will help you succeed in this program

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The main aspect that will distinguish me from all other applicants is my passion to learn and excel despite the abuse I face from males just because I am a female. They always limit my capability. For instance, there was a professor who always ignored my answers intentionally to questions he asked and praise male students after saying the same answer I said a minute ago. Also, all the assistant tutors never lose a chance to tell me that all my hard work in studying will go in vain because eventually, I will end up as an unemployed housewife. Another example, is when I presented an assignment to one of my professors he asked “who wrote this for you? ” And the most recent interaction was when I went back asking for the syllables to apply for a master program in Sweden the moment one of the tutors knew that he laughed and said “You want to go there? Are you kidding”. Despite all this, I never lost passion, due to my competitive personality, their sarcasm gave me the motivation to show them that I can do it and I will excel.
The main aspect that will distinguish me from all other applicants is my passion to learn and excel despite the abuse I face from males
just
because
I am a female. They always limit my capability.
For instance
, there was a professor who always
ignored
my answers
intentionally
to questions he asked and praise male students after saying the same answer I said a minute ago.
Also
, all the assistant tutors never lose a chance to
tell
me that all my
hard
work in studying will go in vain
because
eventually
, I will
end
up as an unemployed housewife. Another example, is when I presented an assignment to one of my professors he asked “who wrote this for you? ” And the most recent interaction was when I went back asking for the syllables to apply for a master program in Sweden the moment one of the tutors knew that he laughed and said “You want to go there? Are you kidding”. Despite all this, I never lost passion, due to my competitive personality, their sarcasm gave me the motivation to
show
them that I can do it and I will excel.

IELTS essay how your interest and skills will help you succeed in this program

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