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How would you spend your last day if you knew you had only one more  day to live? Life is so unpredictable and at times some may wish to have total control over circumstances. If you were told today that it is your last day living on this earth, how would you spend the remaining hours of your life? Please feel free to express your thoughts/opinions on this topic. You are entitled to your opinion. * Make a significant, positive contribution to the discussion by introducing creative/original insights that demonstrate serious and deep reflection expressed in a clear manner.

How would you spend your last day if you knew you had only one more day to live? Life is so unpredictable and at times some may wish to have total control over circumstances. If you were told today that it is your last day living on this earth, how would you spend the remaining hours of your life? Please feel free to express your thoughts/opinions on this topic. You are entitled to your opinion. * Make a significant, positive contribution to the discussion by introducing creative/original insights that demonstrate serious and deep reflection expressed in a clear manner. jdj0M
Back in 2019, everything seems to be under controlled. When everything seems to be normal and just perfect, suddenly a pandemic outbreak around the world. None of us have ever thought that we have to go through this in the world driven by high technology. It seemed like a nightmare I was unable to wake up until now. The COVID-19 pandemic has changed our lives since 2020. Some of us lost our loved ones within a night while some infected with coronavirus. All the impossible became possible and we knew that it was life. We could not predict what will happen next. If I were told today that it is my last day, I would spend my last day by accompanying my family members, travelling around the world and completing my wish list. I would spend my last day with my family members if I knew I had only one more day to live. To me, family members play significant role in my life especially my parents. They mean everything for me. They raised me up and taught me values since the day I was born. If it was my last day in my life, I would spend the whole day to accompany them to do what they like. I would bring my parents out for an occasion by the sea because they love to listen to the sound of the waves flapping on the beach. Chatting with them is the most relaxable thing because I can grab this opportunity to express my gratitude towards them. I would ask forgiveness from them from all my mistakes and hope them not to be sad about my leaving. Travelling around the world is always my dream when I grow up. I would travel to Hong Kong and spend my whole day playing in Disneyland. I love to play the facilities in amusement park, such as roller coaster, rides and water park. These exciting activities would be my last activity before I die. I would eat Hong Kong street foods and enjoy my night at the finest hotel. So, I would able to create beautiful memories and leave without any regret. If today was my last day living in the earth, I would complete my wish list for the remaining hours in my life. I would hang out with friends to watch movies and chat with each other. Besides, I would go hiking at Mount Kinabalu with nature lovers. Hiking is an activity that requires fit and healthy body. Thus, I keep on training myself so I can climb up the mountain one day in the future. I really enjoy breathing in the fresh air during hiking. I would love to see every sunrise and sunset and the sceneries at the hilltop. Therefore, I would like to spend my last day on my own to accomplish my wish list. Those are the things I would do in the remaining hours in my life. Those things will surely make me happy before I leave the world. I think those things are the perfect way to say goodbye to my loved ones. Life is unpredictable. We have to learn to live in the moment not the past or the future. So, when it comes the day, we have no regrets for anything.
Back in 2019, everything seems to be under controlled. When everything seems to be normal and
just
perfect,
suddenly
a pandemic outbreak around the
world
. None of us have ever
thought
that we
have to
go through this in the
world
driven by high technology. It seemed like a nightmare I was unable to wake up until
now
. The COVID-19 pandemic has
changed
our
lives
since 2020.
Some
of us lost our
loved
ones
within a night while
some
infected with coronavirus. All the impossible became
possible and
we knew that it was
life
. We could not predict what will happen
next
. If I were
told
today
that it is my last day, I would
spend
my last day by accompanying my family members, travelling around the
world
and completing my wish list.

I would
spend
my last day with my family members if I knew I had
only
one more day to
live
. To me, family members play significant role in my
life
especially
my parents. They mean everything
for
me. They raised me up and taught me values since the day I
was born
. If it was my last day in my
life
, I would
spend
the whole day to accompany them to do what they like. I would bring my parents out for an occasion by the sea
because
they
love
to listen to the sound of the waves flapping on the beach. Chatting with them is the most
relaxable
thing
because
I can grab this opportunity to express my gratitude towards them. I would ask forgiveness from them from all my mistakes and hope them not to be sad about my leaving.

Travelling around the
world
is always my dream when I grow up. I would travel to Hong Kong and
spend
my whole day playing in Disneyland. I
love
to play the facilities in amusement park, such as roller coaster, rides and water park. These exciting activities would be my last activity
before
I
die
. I would eat Hong Kong street foods and enjoy my night at the finest hotel.
So
, I
would able
to create
beautiful
memories and
leave
without any regret.

If
today
was my last day living in the earth, I would complete my wish list for the remaining hours in my
life
. I would hang out with friends to
watch
movies and chat with each other.
Besides
, I would go hiking at Mount
Kinabalu
with nature lovers. Hiking is an activity that requires
fit
and healthy body.
Thus
, I
keep
on training myself
so
I can climb up the mountain one day in the future. I
really
enjoy breathing in the fresh air during hiking. I would
love
to
see
every sunrise and sunset and the sceneries at the hilltop.
Therefore
, I would like to
spend
my last day on my
own
to accomplish my wish list.

Those are the things I would do in the remaining hours in my
life
. Those things will
surely
make
me happy
before
I
leave
the
world
. I
think
those things are the perfect way to say goodbye to my
loved
ones
.
Life
is unpredictable. We
have to
learn to
live
in the moment
not the past or the future.
So
, when it
comes
the day, we have no regrets for anything.
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IELTS essay How would you spend your last day if you knew you had only one more day to live? Life is so unpredictable and at times some may wish to have total control over circumstances. If you were told today that it is your last day living on this earth, how would you spend the remaining hours of your life? Please feel free to express your thoughts/opinions on this topic. You are entitled to your opinion. * Make a significant, positive contribution to the discussion by introducing creative/original insights that demonstrate serious and deep reflection expressed in a clear manner.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
547 words
5.5
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