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How will taking this course help you achieve your career goals?

How will taking this course help you achieve your career goals? PXG1B
By taking this course, I will have taken my first step towards Korean. I want to learn korean because i want to do masters in visual communication and design in korea. Since I have no financial situation, I will apply for the Korean government scholarship. I think that if my Korean is at a good level, my chances of getting a Korean state scholarship will increase and I will not have any difficulties while living there. I love Korean culture. When I took a look at the animated design works, the photographs taken and many other artworks made in Korea, I realized that I wanted to learn how they must be there and made. I think that the first step in making these and contributing to the development of art in a universal sense will be by learning this language. I hope you will support me in this matter.
By taking this course, I will have taken my
first
step towards Korean. I want to learn
korean
because
i
want to do masters in visual communication and design in
korea
. Since I have no financial situation, I will apply for the Korean
government
scholarship.

I
think
that if my Korean is at a
good
level, my chances of getting a Korean state scholarship will increase and I will not have any difficulties while living there. I
love
Korean culture. When I took a look at the animated design works, the photographs taken and
many
other artworks made in Korea, I realized that I wanted to learn how they
must
be there and made.

I
think
that the
first
step in making these and contributing to the development of art in a universal sense will be by learning this language. I hope you will support me in this matter.

IELTS essay How will taking this course help you achieve your career goals?

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