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How we can assess students.

How we can assess students. m22jq
According to my way of thinking i see that the best method in order to assess students is write an exam that because of tow reasons i will explain them in my essay as followed: First, no one can deny that after we graduated from school until now we remember up to 90 of what we were studied and that due to exams, the exams force the student to study more and make progress in order to get high score, That would improve student's mind thus they can respond to valuable information in the class, furthermore, that will uplift competitive spirit among students. my brief story is a compelling evidence when i was a child i was studying hard tirelessly and we were supposed to obtain certain scores in order to pass that year so that we were consistently reviewing what we were studied owing to we knew there was an exam, as a result so far i never forget any information i have studied in school, they will have a fixed method to communicate and spread beneficial and credibled information. Second, from my perspective we are being examined and tested for sake of find a job opportunity, How-to a business owner to know that you have a competency ؟! It is a direct proportion, Represented in. if you are forced to study for an exam you will focus on your class and pay teachers your attention that leads to get high scores then you will have a suitable job opportunity, my friend story is a cogent example my friend is an entrepreneur, so that, he has always taken intellectually intelligent graduates and that well known via their grades. To sum up, it seems to me that if you had been ordered and forced to study for an exam you would have been chosen for a job opportunity. i see an examination method is an advanced educational style in order to make sure that all students will graduate with effective mind and they staveoff any sort of forgetfulness of information or main educational matters.
According to my way of thinking
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that the best method in
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order
to assess
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students
is
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write
an exam that
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because
of tow reasons
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i
will
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explain
them in my essay as followed:

First
, no one can deny that after we graduated from school until
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now
we remember up to 90 of what we
were studied
and that due to exams, the exams force the
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student
to study more and
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make
progress in
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order
to
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get
high score, That would
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improve
student's mind
thus
they can respond to valuable information in the
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class
,
furthermore
,

that will uplift competitive spirit among
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students
.
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my
brief story is a compelling evidence when
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i
was a child
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i
was studying
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hard
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tirelessly and
we
were supposed
to obtain certain scores in
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order
to pass that year
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so
that we were
consistently
reviewing what we
were studied
owing to we knew there was an exam,
as a result
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so
far
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i
never forget any information
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i
have studied in school, they will have a
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fixed
method to communicate and spread beneficial and
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credibled
information.

Second, from my perspective we are being

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examined
and
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tested
for sake of find a job opportunity, How-to a business owner to know that you have a competency ؟! It is a direct proportion, Represented in. if you
are forced
to study for an exam you will focus on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and pay teachers your attention that leads to
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get
high scores then you will have a suitable job opportunity, my friend story is a cogent
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my
friend is an entrepreneur,
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so
that, he has always taken
intellectually
intelligent graduates and that well known via their grades.

To sum up, it seems to me that if you had
been ordered
and forced to study for an exam you would have
been chosen
for a job opportunity.

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i
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see
an examination method is an advanced educational style in
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order
to
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make
sure that all
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students
will graduate with effective
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mind and
they
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staveoff
any sort of forgetfulness of information or main educational matters.
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IELTS essay How we can assess students.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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