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How was your school holiday

How was your school holiday AwEyM
In my school holiday I don’t do anything much or go to anywhere because it period covid 19 the most scougrgest in thai. Mostly i will live at home do my activities and routine. My routine in morning mostly i will wake up at 10 o’clock a. m. . After I wake up firstly i will get a phone and check the news in this morning or the news in yesterday. When I check the news finish i go to take a bath. In morning I don’t eat breakfast because I don’t hungry. First meal will start at noon for lunch i will order father in the morning and he bring it tame at noon. After I finish lunch in afternoon start at 1 o’clock p. m. i start open computer and trade crypto checks the graft to see it go up or down for sell and buy crypto because i want to earn money. And then in evening i start read books or watch youtube about business by reason of my dream job is to be a entrepreneur and open my business. In early evening i start learn ielts due to I want to enter faculty of inter so i must submit my ielts scores. for that I must prepare to ielts test so much. Personally I think ielts is a very hard test. Next after read finish i start have dinner with my parent. After that I play game with my friends such as Minecraft or rov or someday when my friends busy I watch series in Netflix and when I finish i go to take a bath and go to bed. and this is my routine in school holidays mostly my school holiday almost like this in every day.
In my school holiday I don’t do anything much or go to anywhere
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because
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it
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covid 19
the most
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will
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at home do my activities and routine. My routine in
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mostly
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i
will wake up at
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10 o’clock a. m
.
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.
After I wake up
firstly
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i
will
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get
a phone and
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check
the news in this
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or the news in yesterday.
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When
I
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the news
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finish
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i
go to take a bath. In
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morning I
don’t eat breakfast
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I don’t hungry.
First
meal will
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start
at noon for lunch
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i
will order father in the
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he
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bring
it tame at noon. After I
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lunch in afternoon
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.
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i
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open computer and trade crypto
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checks
the graft to
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see
it go up or down
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for sell
and
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buy
crypto
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because
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i
want to earn money. And then in evening
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start
read books or
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youtube
about business by reason of my dream job is to be
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a
entrepreneur and open my business. In early evening
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i
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start
learn
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ielts
due to I want to enter faculty of inter
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submit my
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scores.
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very
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hard
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after read
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finish
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i
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start
have dinner with my parent. After that I play game with my friends such as Minecraft or
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or someday when my friends busy I
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watch
series in Netflix and when I
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finish
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i
go to take a bath and go to bed.
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and
this is my routine in school holidays
mostly
my school holiday almost like this in every day.
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IELTS essay How was your school holiday

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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