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How to reduce your pressure.

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How to reduce your pressure. At this time, I realize people, especially young people and students, have more pressure when they see people who are victorious in their positions. I share information articles about discovering a job that you will love. Peer pressure is inevitable in your life. You can pressure me when I see classmates who have scholarships or people who are the same age as you have high salaries. And you are still looking for a favorite job. How can you throw off peer pressure? From the research, the author gives identity that: People should have an orientation in their career, therefore they can control the target. How can you create a target for yourself? Finding information for studying primary and secondary research. It can be done through books, information articles, etc.
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people
,
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young
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people
and students, have more
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pressure
when they
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see
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people
who are victorious in their positions. I share information articles about discovering a job that you will
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love
. Peer
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pressure
is inevitable in your life. You can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pressure
me when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
classmates who have scholarships or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who are the same age as you have high salaries. And you are
still
looking for a favorite job.

How can you throw off peer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pressure
? From the research, the author gives identity that:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
should have an orientation in their career,
therefore
they can control the target.

How can you create a target for yourself? Finding information for studying primary and secondary research. It can
be done
through books, information articles, etc.
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IELTS essay How to reduce your pressure.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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