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How to protect our environment

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All of us are responsible for keeping our environment clean. Because of our poor environmental practices, the pollution level increases every year. Recycling and conserving resources are two of the best way to keep the environment clean. Recycling: First, recycling and using reusable bags is so important for protecting our environment. For instance, when we use plastic bags to go shopping, that is damaging to our environment. Therefore, we need to try to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags and its easy way because we can wash it many times. Moreover, donating your old clothes will also help protect the environment. To summarize, protecting our environment with simple methods will help reduce environmental pollution. Saving water and air: Unfortunately, we waste a lot of water but do not notice. To start with, when you brush your teeth trun off the tap, if you want to go to a place close to you, do not use a car, also before going to sleep, make sure the television and power turned off. To conclude, saving water and air is the biggest change we can make to the environment. . To conclude, we can protect our environment with easy way to do it in daily life. We need to support community and encourage them by remind them in social media and in schools about the importance of keep environment clean. As I was saying, small changes will be a huge effect to our world. In my opinion, we need to have strict rules to keep our environment shine and clean and the government should impose fines about anyone pollute the environment.
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clean.
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of our poor environmental practices, the pollution level increases every year. Recycling and conserving resources are two of the best way to
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keep
the
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environment
clean.

Recycling:

First
, recycling and using reusable
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bags
is
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so
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important
for protecting our
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environment
.
For instance
, when we
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use
plastic
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bags
to go shopping,
that is
damaging to our
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environment
.
Therefore
, we need to try to
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use
cloth
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bags
instead
of plastic
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bags
and its easy way
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because
we can wash it
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many
times.
Moreover
, donating your
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old
clothes will
also
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help
protect the
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environment
.
To summarize
, protecting our
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environment
with simple methods will
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help
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reduce
environmental pollution.

Saving water and air:

Unfortunately, we waste
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a lot of
water
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but
do not notice. To
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with, when you brush your teeth
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trun
off the tap, if you want to go to a place close to you, do not
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use
a car,
also
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before
going to sleep,
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make
sure the television and power turned off.
To conclude
, saving water and air is the biggest
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change
we can
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make
to the
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environment
.
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To
conclude, we can protect our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
with easy way to do it in daily life. We need to support community and encourage them by remind them in social media and in schools about the importance of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
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environment
clean. As I was saying,
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small
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changes
will be a huge effect to our world. In my opinion, we need to have strict
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rules
to
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keep
our
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environment
shine and clean and the
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government
should impose fines about anyone
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pollute
the
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environment
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IELTS essay How to protect our environment

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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