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how to manufacture chocolate.

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The picture describes how to manufacture chocolate. It is clear that there are 10 steps in the chocolate produce process. The process starts with the plant of cacao tree, ends with pressing inner part and producing liquid chocolate At the first stage of the process, the cacao trees are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia until they are ripe red pods. Then, the pods are harvested and white cocoa beans are used for the next step. The third stage involves fermenting this white cocoa beans. After that, this mixture is speared under the sun in order to dry. Before they are transported by train or lorry or ship, this mixture is put in large sacks. The next step is the mixture in sacks taken to factory and beans roasted about 350C. Next, the beans are crushed and the outer shell are not used. Finally, the inner part is pressed and the liquid chocolate is manufactured.

The picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 how to manufacture chocolate.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are 10 steps in the chocolate produce process. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the plant of cacao tree, ends with pressing inner part and producing liquid chocolate

At the first
 stage of the process, the cacao trees are grown
 in South America, Africa and Indonesia until they are ripe red pods. Then, the pods are harvested
 and white cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
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used
 for the next
 step. The third stage involves fermenting this white cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
. After that, this mixture is speared
 under the sun in order to dry.

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Before
 they are transported
 by train or lorry or ship, this mixture is put
 in large sacks. The next
 step is the mixture in sacks taken to factory and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 roasted about 350C. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are crushed
 and the outer shell are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. Finally
, the inner part is pressed
 and the liquid chocolate is manufactured
. 