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History about your hometown

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As I learned in school, the reason that we call Hanoi is the capital of Vietnam is because in 1010 King Lý Thái Tổ moved the capital from Hoa Lư to Đại La citadel. Because this place is a high and flat land, densely populated with all things rich and prosperous, is the capital of the four directions, so the King took this place as the capital and named it Thăng Long, which we now call Hanoi. lkqdwldnkqwkndlqwknldwqklnqwdnklnkqlwdnklwqknlwdqnkwdqnkkldwnqkndwqknldwqklndqwknldqwnkldknqlwknqwdkndqwknlkdqwnlknldqwklndwqknlkdwqnll
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IELTS essay History about your hometown

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