Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe a movie that you like

Describe a movie that you like LlNM1
My favorite movie is called “the pursuit of happyness”. this film is very captivating and it is full vital scenes because the film has been taken from life ful. So, This movie is about how so poor person succeeded. I watched it on the internet in the winter last year. I was watching the videos on my instagram channel at that time and one's day I watched a part of the movie "the pursuit of happyness " on my instagram channel. Then I looked for full part of the movie on internet and I finally found it. So, I watched it and it liked me. There are two reasons why I like this film. First reason; This movie affords very strongly the motivation to human. Finally, second reason, I am fan of the foreign films, that is why I fond of foreign movies. So, I recommend it to others because it urges to try people to their towards the goals with large power. I also decide to watch this film twice a month for motivation. then I recommend you too. Of course, you are worth the time to watch this movie.
My favorite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
is called
“the pursuit of
Possible spelling mistake found.
happyness
”.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
film is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
captivating and it is full vital scenes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the film has
been taken
from life
Possible spelling mistake found.
ful
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
is about how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
poor person succeeded. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
it on the internet in the winter last year. I was watching the videos on my
Possible spelling mistake found.
instagram
channel at that time and one's day I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
a part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
the pursuit of
Possible spelling mistake found.
happyness
Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbol
"
on my
Possible spelling mistake found.
instagram
channel. Then I looked for full part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
on internet and I
finally
found it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
it and it liked me. There are two reasons why I like this film.
First
reason; This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
affords
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
strongly
the motivation to human.
Finally
, second reason, I am fan of the foreign films,
that is
why I fond of foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I recommend it to others
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it urges
Did you mean "trying"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to try
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to their towards the goals with large power. I
also
decide to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
this film twice a month for motivation.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
then
I recommend you too.
Of course
, you are worth the time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad
Show Comments
Language is the blood of the soul into which thoughts run and out of which they grow.
Oliver Wendell Holmes

IELTS essay Describe a movie that you like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    the importance of friendship in every people's life
    Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the life of a person instead of having many important things in life. A good and balanced human interaction is very necessary for the survival of everyone. The following essay will discuss the importance of friendship. Firstly, friendship will help yo...
  • 5.5band
    Many of the students work while studying.
    Many of the students work while studying. This can result in not enough time for education and usually feeling nervous about both study and work. I totally agree with this opinion, if someone trying to do two jobs in same time, this person mostly unsuccessful about both of these jobs. First problem...
  • Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
    Roger Bacon
  • 6.5band
    Describe about Fast Food
    Some people think teachers must be responsible for children not to eat junk food. Others believe that it is parents’ responsibility. Educators are believed to have responsibility in urging youth to avoid consumption of half-prepared food by some while others put this burden on the shoulder of paren...
  • 5.5band
    Some people believe that children should not start learning a foreign language at early ages. What do you think? Why?
    In my opinion they are seriously mistaken. According to research, immature’s mind is more efficient than adult so they learn another subject easier. Mind efficiency means the ability to reach learning, problem solving, or instructional goals through optimal use of mental resources. The most obvious ...
  • Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
    Rita Mae Brown
  • 6band
    Many students do not finish schooling why is this and how does this effect
    Education is a key to individuals success. People claim that huge number of pupils drop out from their studies/tuition. This essay will analyse the issues connected to dropping out from their academics and it's results First and foremost there are a lot of reasons for the discontinuation of children...
  • 5.5band
    Traffic jams are a serious problem in many large cities today. How should we deal with this problem?
    Traffic jams are a serious problem in today's large cities. It affects everybody from major companies to people living their daily lives. The reasons for traffic jams can be various from road accidents to there being too many cars on the street at a time. Some ideas to solve traffic jams are reducin...
  • A different language is a different vision of life.
    Federico Fellini