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How to living a happy life

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Living a happy life is something we all aspire to have. But not everyone can find their own happiness. Perhaps the mistake is that they expect something big. Actually to live a happy life is very simple. You can make changes from yourself or find them from the small, simple things in life. First, you have to think positively, do not blame yourself in any situation. Forget the past and focus on what you are doing right now. And you also should not compare yourself to anyone. Next, you should appreciate the little things around you. Be grateful for what you have. Then, spend more time with yourself, your family, and your loved ones. Later, be kind to people. Spreading kindness among the world is important and it often gives us pleasure when we are the reason someone is happy. It is simple steps to living a happy life.
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from yourself or find them from the
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, simple things in
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things around you. Be grateful for what you have. Then, spend more time with yourself, your family, and your
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ones. Later, be kind to
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people
. Spreading kindness among the world is
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important
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gives us pleasure when we are the reason someone is
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IELTS essay How to living a happy life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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