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In Hungary, most of the people prefer to stay indoors and watch TV all day. I consider this as a terrible attitude! The excuses mostly the price of the sports, but that is why I am going to recommend a few, low priced activity. First, running. I know, someone say it's boring or too hard, but it is one of the cheapest sport, you only need a pair of shoe! The second one is hiking. There are some fascinating parts in Hungary, and it is an excellent activity, to visit these places! There are loads of sports, which are too expensive, especially in Hungary. Like skiing! Because we do not have gigantic mountains, and the weather also quite warm, but I in spite of all these, I recommend skiing, I think it is a fantastic sport! To sum up, you have hundreds of opportunities, so get up and choose one and do it!

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people
 prefer to stay indoors and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 TV all day. I consider this as a terrible attitude! The excuses mostly
 the price of the sports, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
that is
 why I am going to recommend a few, This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.low-priced
low priced
 activity.

First
, running. I know, someone The pronoun ‘someone’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “says”, “said”.sayssaid
say
 it's boring or too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is one of the cheapest sport, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 need a Possible agreement error. The noun ‘shoe’ seems to be countable; consider using: “pair of shoes”, “pair of shoon”.pair of shoespair of shoon
pair of shoe
! The second one is hiking. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fascinating parts in Hungary, and it is an excellent activity, to visit these places!

There are loads of sports, which are too expensive, especially
 in Hungary. Like skiing! This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 we do not have gigantic mountains, and the weather also
 quite warm, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 all these, I recommend skiing, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is a fantastic sport!

To sum up, you have hundreds of opportunities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up and choose one and do it! 