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How to get medicine a patient?

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‌‏A medicine is an important substance used in the diagnosis or treatment of diseases affecting humans or animals. such as giving medicine before the operation and recovery medicines after the operation. there are steps to how does medicine get to a patient. First, a factory manufactures medication. As pills, injections, etc. Then Another factory packs them. Secondly, a lorry transport them to a distributor. Thirdly, the distributor sells them to a purchaser. After that, the purchaser buy medicine for a hospital or pharmacist. Finally, the doctor or the nurse brings the medicine to the patient. To sum up, it is It'gs a long process of products and services. this process is very important to deliver medicine to the patient because helps to preserve human life. Many people work together in this process. If they do not work together none of these people on their own can provide the products patients want. they always need to work together.
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such
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there
are steps to how does
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, a factory manufactures medication. As pills, injections, etc. Then Another factory packs them.
Secondly
, a lorry transport them to a distributor.
Thirdly
, the distributor sells them to a purchaser. After that, the purchaser
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buy
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medicine
for a hospital or pharmacist.
Finally
, the doctor or the nurse brings the
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medicine
to the
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patient
. To sum up, it is It'gs a long process of products and services.
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this
process is
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to deliver
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to the
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patient
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because
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helps
to preserve human life.
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people
work together in this process.
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can provide the products
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patients
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they
always need to work together.
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IELTS essay How to get medicine a patient?

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  American English
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157 words
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