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How to do in order to have a healthy life

How to do in order to have a healthy life pKgoy
It is health that is real wealth and not pieces of gold and silver – Mahatma Gandhi. This is a correct concept. Good health is a good state of the body both materially and mentally. So what do we need to do to live healthy? The most important part of good health is a healthy lifestyle: Exercise regularly, drink enough water, balance work and rest, . . . Having good health will significantly improve work performance and lead an active lifestyle. However, there are still some people, especially young people, who still ignore health signals to live an unhealthy lifestyle. much as staying up all night to plow movies, using a lot of stimulants, not doing sports, not cultivating knowledge. . . Leads to poor health. We should understand the importance of good health and learn a healthy lifestyle
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IELTS essay How to do in order to have a healthy life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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