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how to deal with peer pressure.

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Entering university is a huge step for every student and there are numerous differences between high school and university that students have to adapt with. The problem that almost all students get throughout university, especially in top universities, is the fear of peer pressure, which is the feeling that you do not want to fall behind or not keep up with your friends. Peer pressure is the influence wielded by people within the same social group. It is also the term used to describe the effect this influence has on a person to conform in order to be accepted by the group. Often, peers are thought of as friends, but peers can be anyone of similar status such as people who are the same age, who have the same abilities, and who share a social status. Peer pressure is commonly thought of in a negative light, but in reality, it is actually not always a bad thing. In many situations, peer pressure is used to positively influence people. Learning about acceptable group norms can be a positive part of learning how to live with and socialize with other people. Thus, instead of avoiding or ignoring it, we should move forward and get through peer pressure to develop ourselves. Firstly, do not let peer pressure come on you, you are ready for it. Preparing carefully and making detailed plans for everything you are gonna do are the most necessary. Hardly could you be confident about your work when you know nothing about it. Therefore, you should set up everything clearly and practice your work cautiously, and no one could pressure you, even your peers. Besides, making friends is important and you need to cautiously build friendships with the right people. True friends will not make you feel pressure, they will help you get through it and be good examples for you. People who share your values are less likely to be the people who will bully you into doing things you don't want to do. Not only friends but adults are also people you can count on. Adults may have experienced the problem you are facing, so they will have the right perspective on the problems and help you overcome this pressure Hence, in some difficult situations, you can rely on trusted adults so that they will give you advice from their experiences. Lastly, the most useful tip for you is: “Be yourself and be confident in what you will do. ” The more confident you are, the easier you find the ways to cope with those issues, and the less pressured you may feel. Furthermore, should you be yourself, people will have a good influence on you and you will avoid negative influences from friends around. In short, peer pressure is not always discouraging and you could turn it into motivation to improve yourself. so have the courage to accept peer pressure and get over it.
Entering
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university
is a huge step for every student and there are numerous differences between high school and
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university
that students
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have to
adapt with. The problem that almost all students
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get
throughout
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university
,
especially
in top
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universities
, is the fear of
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peer
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pressure
, which is the feeling that you do not want to fall behind or not
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keep
up with your friends.

Peer
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pressure
is the
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influence
wielded by
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people
within the same social group. It is
also
the term
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used
to
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describe
the effect this
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influence
has on a person to conform in order to be
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accepted
by the group.
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Often
,
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peers
are
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thought
of as
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friends
,
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but
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peers
can be anyone of similar status such as
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people
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who
are the same age,
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who
have the same abilities, and
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who
share a social status.

Peer
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pressure
is
commonly
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thought
of in a
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negative
light,
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but
in reality, it is actually not always a
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bad
thing. In
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many
situations,
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peer
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pressure
is
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used
to
positively
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influence
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people
. Learning about acceptable group norms can be a
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positive
part of learning how to
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live
with and socialize with other
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people
.
Thus
,
instead
of avoiding or ignoring it, we should
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move
forward and
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get
through
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peer
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pressure
to develop ourselves.
Firstly
, do not
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let
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peer
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pressure
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come
on you, you are ready for it. Preparing
carefully
and making detailed plans for everything you are
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gonna
do are the most necessary. Hardly could you be confident about your work when you know nothing about it.
Therefore
, you should set up everything
clearly
and practice your work
cautiously
, and no one could
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pressure
you, even your
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peers
.
Besides
, making
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friends
is
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important
and you need to
cautiously
build friendships with the right
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people
. True
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friends
will not
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make
you feel
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pressure
, they will
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help
you
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get
through it and be
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good
examples for you.
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People
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who
share your values are less likely to be the
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people
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who
will bully you into doing things you don't want to do. Not
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only
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friends
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but
adults are
also
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people
you can count on. Adults may have experienced the problem you are facing,
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so
they will have the right perspective on the problems and
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help
you overcome this
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pressure
Hence
, in
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some
difficult situations, you can rely on trusted adults
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so
that they will give you advice from their experiences.
Lastly
, the most useful tip for you is: “Be yourself and be confident in what you will do. ” The more confident you are, the easier you find the ways to cope with those issues, and the less pressured you may feel.
Furthermore
, should you be yourself,
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people
will have a
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good
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influence
on you and you will avoid
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negative
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influences
from
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friends
around.

In short,
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peer
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pressure
is not always discouraging and you could turn it into motivation to
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improve
yourself.
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so
have the courage to accept
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peer
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pressure
and
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get
over it.
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IELTS essay how to deal with peer pressure.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
486 words
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