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How the world change before and after coronavirous

How the world change before and after coronavirous KwGN1

All the world suffer from coronavirus. We can see changes all around the world. We can note changes even in our daily life and studying. Prior to coronavirus, we could all studied in our normal classes at universities and schools, but after the epidemic we just use the internet to study. For example, I studied English in the institute but now I'm studying English online to avoid coronavirus to spread. Acually that makes a big different in our way of studying. We get used to study online hardly because we get sleepy most of the time. Also, there are alot of changes in our daily life especially in the occasion like wedding. We used to celebrate wedding in a larg place with thousands of people. After coronavirous, we get used to celebrating with part of our family or the grome take the bride with out any ceremony. For instance, one of my frieds got married. Ha didn't celebrate but he made live wedding in facebook. In that way he avoided gathering to bypass the epidemic to spread, and he celebrate in a new way. In conclusion, the epidemic made alot of differences in our life especially in studying and celebrating.

All the world suffer from coronavirus. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 all around the world. We can note This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 even in our daily life and studying.

Prior to coronavirus, we could all studied in our normal classes at universities and schools, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after the epidemic we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet to study. For example
, I studied English in the institute This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I'm studying English online to avoid coronavirus to spread. Possible spelling mistake found.Actually
Acually
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 in our way of studying. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
In the grammatical structure 'pronoun + be/get + used + to + verb', the verb 'used' is used with the gerund: "used to studying".used to studying
used to study
 online hardly This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 sleepy most of the time. Also
, there Possible spelling mistake found.area lotare a lotare lotare plotare slotare alto
are alot
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in our daily life especially
 in the occasion like wedding. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to celebrate wedding in a Possible spelling mistake found.largelagLaraLarslardlark
larg
 place with thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. After Possible spelling mistake found.coronavirus
coronavirous
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to celebrating with part of our family or the Possible spelling mistake found.RomegrovegnomegrimegropeROME
grome
 take the bride This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 any ceremony. For instance
, one of my Possible spelling mistake found.friendsfriedfriesFriedaFriendsfriers
frieds
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 married. Ha didn't celebrate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he made This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 wedding The usual collocation for "facebook" is "on". Did you mean "on facebook"?on facebook
in facebook
. In that way he avoided gathering to bypass the epidemic to spread, and he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "celebrates", "celebrated".celebratescelebrated
celebrate
Consider replacing "in a new way" with the adverb for "new"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a new way
.

In conclusion
, the epidemic made Possible spelling mistake found.a lotlotplotslotaltoaloft
alot
 of differences in our life especially
 in studying and celebrating. 