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how the covid-19 pandemic has affected your life

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My life has been severely affected by the covid 19 pandemic. First, my family was infected with covid. We had to deal with fevers, coughs, loss of taste. . . it was a terrible time for my family. Second, the whole city I live in is quarantined, so a lot of trouble happens to me. For example, I can't go to school and have to study online at home, I can't buy necessary items like before, all my parents' jobs were canceled, so we had a lot of financial difficulties, everyone My plans have also been delayed. Third, the worst thing that happened was that a relative of mine died of covid. I was deeply saddened by this regret. In short, the covid-19 pandemic has affected my life a lot, it has taken many human lives and left a lot of suffering for people, and I hope that the bad things This bad thing quickly disappears and never happens again.
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severely
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affected
by the
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covid 19
pandemic.
First
, my family
was infected
with
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covid
. We had to deal with fevers, coughs, loss of taste.
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live
in
is quarantined
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of trouble happens to me.
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, I can't go to school and
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have to
study online at home, I can't
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buy
necessary items like
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before
, all my parents' jobs
were canceled
,
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so
we had a
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lot
of financial difficulties, everyone My plans have
also
been delayed
. Third, the worst thing that happened was that a relative of mine
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died
of
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covid
. I was
deeply
saddened by this regret. In short, the
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covid-19
pandemic has
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affected
my life a
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lot
, it has taken
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many
human
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lives
and
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left
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of suffering for
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, and I hope that the
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disappears and never happens again.

IELTS essay how the covid-19 pandemic has affected your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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